Jules: This poem seems dark.
Andrei: It's good to counterbalance the lighter stuff. A certain amount of shock saves us from complacence. Too much, however, can immobilize.
Soo: I don't mind gloom if a solution is suggested. Dis poem, however, seems noir & resigned to oblivion – it's utterly hopeless.
Ellesha: Every dilemma has solutions if we're creative.
Philyra: That's naive. In some scenarios, checkmate occurs.
Ocean Dumping - an art work and poem by T Newfields
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