Shu: Even though the spelling 'z weird, I sort ah like this poem . . .
Juanita: It's okay for an amateur. However, I dare say the art is better than the poetry.
Almost Zatisified - an art work by T Newfields

Almust Zatisfied

I kuld sp
end a whule day
ruttin poetry
un drawin lei
surely uf thu kries
uf starvin people
and klarions uf eco-trave
sty wure mure myths. . .

they uren't

squeezing a ripe olive
over a glass uf culd chablis
I realuze our real tusk
is not just tu kreate pieces u
f art but tu make urr world m
ore artlike
so thut thu nigh
tmares aruund us f
aid into dreemz
& dust ant mem
more -ies

Jack: I dislike it when poets make themselves arcane or unapproachable . . .
Ella: Is that so? What I detest is when poets state the obvious.
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