As I often do when reading Bob's work, I have an imaginary conversation with him. Here is what I heard when working on a poem he started in September 1971 and subsequently revised several times. A copy of a 1998 revision appears here. –

Tim: The themes in this poem have been raised by many authors. It touches upon perennial themes.
Bob I have never claimed to be unique. I just mirror a small fragment of reality as best as I can.
Tim: Some parts of this poem suggest predetermination. Do you believe in that?
Bob: Perhaps I believe in both free will and predetermination. I know that sounds odd, but reality is stranger than we often imagine.
Tim: With your permission, I'd like to change this poem a bit.
Bob: (frowning) I knew you were going to say that! (chucking) Perhaps it was predetermined?
Tim: I'll post your original version online, then reconstruct one possible meaning.
Bob: (shrugging) While living I hesitated to have others revise my poems. I thought my poems were part of "me." However, the notions of "me" and "mine" often change after death. Isn't the whole creation actually part of us?

Dance of Duality

I am the sea You are the earth
You are the sand I am the surf
I come to you Continually
Sun & moon & stars themselves
Witness our dance of duality
I am the sky You are land
Through wind & rain Connections reform & splay
I am a dawn On your forested slopes
Each of us reawaken To varied songs of hope
In our ongoing dance With its vales & peaks
It is worth asking will we transcend
this ongoing sleep?

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