Tim: |
Good wisdom does not necessarily translate into good poetry.
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Bob: |
(shrugging his shoulders) Who cares about poetry? My goal is to simply discover and communicate Truth to the best of my ability. |
Tim: |
This conversation reminds me of a conversation Socrates had with Protagoras millenia ago.
Basically, it was a debate between universalism and relativism. The echoes of that dialog reverberate across Earth to this day.
I believe there are multiple truths and one person's so-called "truth" is often another person's falsehood. |
Bob: |
In this you are mistaken, but let me be diplomatic: we represent different streams of thought. |
Tim: |
I agree with that, which is why I'd like permission to rework your original poem into an artwork. |
Bob: |
(laughing) Rework a poem? Don't you have better things to do? |
Tim: |
Let me put it this way: your original work seems too much like a sermon. I believe art often says more than words
precisely because it says less. Ironically, sometimes less is more. To merely hint at a meaning, without defining it too explicitly is often a
better way to communicate than writing something out in a didactic lecture format. |
Bob: |
So you want to turn the poem into an artwork? Hmm. I'm mildy curious about how it might turn out. Chances are, however, I will prefer
my earlier version . . . yet you are welcome to play. |